Yeah, that is one of the serious problems with writing a MMM threesome - either I fill the fic with [name] said, or it can get confusing... Guess I need to work on differentiating the speech patterns a lot more >_<
The ending reminds me of "Kidnapping Elder Brother" from Vocaloid xD
Oho? A song, is it? Do you have a link, I've heard some really neat vocaloid stuff ^^
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Date: 2010-11-01 11:03 pm (UTC)The ending reminds me of "Kidnapping Elder Brother" from Vocaloid xD
Oho? A song, is it? Do you have a link, I've heard some really neat vocaloid stuff ^^